literature

Debating With Myself

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Living in  constant struggle
Debating with myself
Do I go out in search of love?
Or do I let it find me?
Risk a good friendship,
For a chance at something more?
Or wait and see
If you make the first move?
Deciding could be easy
If only I had a clue
As to how you feel
If I go for it,
I am going in blind
If I do nothing,
I may never know
Which is the greatest risk?
I do not know
quality may be lacking, but this is just another one I needed to write
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NotenSMSK's avatar
Quality as in the sense of expressions is in a way lacking but then again it is a work as you stated that was required to be put out. The theme is unique to be honest... in its execution. Thus, while it may lack quality it makes up for its bluntness.

There might have been a few more lines that would have made it better but I don't think one needs to forcefully add them.